We are learning to write information reports. To be successful we need to answer these questions.
1. What is it?
2. What does it look like?
3. Where do you find it?
4. What can it do?
5. What do you think about it?
Whales
A whale is a mammal and they are sea creatures. They look like a huge fish, but they aren't. We see them in the ocean. Some people see them at sea. Whales can do back flips. They are the biggest mammal in the whole history of the world. Even bigger than a dinosaur. I feel sad when people kill them.
by Charlotte
Whales
A whale is a mammal and a sea creature. Some whales have spots like the whale shark. They are the biggest animal in the world. They have fins, a tail and a blow hole. Whales are found in the ocean. All of them can dive and back flip. Whales are awesome.
by Ben
Whales
Whales are animals and mammals. Whales are the biggest things in the world. A whale has bumps and they are warm-blooded. The whales live in the ocean. They can swim and breath. Most whales can do back flips. I think whales are cool and awesome because they are monstrous.
by Jack
Thursday, September 9, 2010
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Hi Renwick 2
ReplyDeleteGreat information reports on whales. I enjoy reading things you write.
You will have heard about the big earthquake in Christchurch. It has been scary but my family and I are ok and our house is still in one piece.
Take care
Teresa
Hi everyone and Hi Teresa!
ReplyDeleteGreat to hear you house is ok. And I love all your information reports Renwick 2, you are doing great at your writing. I also particularly enjoyed hearing about what makes a good friend.
Angela (Sam's Mum)